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ट्रेन जलाई जा रही है
यह समझने की बात है-
क्या यह लालू जी की भैंस है ;
जिसने ग़लती से आपका खेत
चर लिया था या
इस मरखनी भैंस ने
किसी के पूत को
सींगों पर धर लिया था?
चक्का जाम है-
क्या ये रास्ते
किसी गलत मंज़िल की ओर जा रहे हैं
या किसी चलने वाले को सता रहे हैं
ये रास्ते किसी के जूते की कील हैं ?
जो पैरों में गड़ रहे हैं
या किसी के माथे पर कलंक का टीका
जड़ रहे हैं?
राह चलते लोग,
जिन्हें हम जानते तक नहीं
उनको मार दे रहे हैं
ये दूकाने -जिन पर लोग
घर का चूल्हा जलाने के लिए बैठे है।
हमारे दुश्मन कैसे बन गए
हम आज तक नहीं समझ पा रहे हैं
‘पंजाब ,सिन्ध ,गुजरात ,मराठा,द्रविड़ ,उत्कल ,बंग’
इतने साल गा कर भी
हम अर्थ नहीं समझ पा रहे हैं।
हम किस अँधेरी गुफ़ा में जा रहे हैं?
नहीं पता ।
मेरे घर मे लगे
शहीद भगतसिंह,सुभाष चन्द्र बोस और शिवाजी के कलेण्डर
मेरे गाँव-घर का पता पूछ रहे हैं-
सोच नहीं पा रहा हूँ
मैं क्या बताऊँ ?
जो आज़ादी के वक़्त देश मिला था
उसे ढूँढ्कर कहाँ से लाऊँ?
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एक अलग तरह की रचना है. सत्यता के बहुत करीब.
अच्छी कविता के साथ बेहतरीन छायाचित्र कविता की फोर्स को कई गुना कर रहा है।
हिमांशु जी इस कविता के माध्यम से समसामयिक चिन्ताओं को हमारे सामने प्रस्तुत करते हैं। कविता में प्रयुक्त शब्दावली पाण्डित्य से अलग आम बोलचाल वाली है जो इसे लोक से जोड़ने में सहायक सिद्ध होती है। कविता के साथ लगाया गया फोटो उसके कथ्य और भाव दोनों से मेल खाता है।
kavita ne dil ko chu liya hai.....ati sunder
अच्छी कविता-बेहतरीन..आभार.
देश के मौजूदा हालात को किवता में बहुत यथाथॆपरक ढंग से दशाॆया गया है । किवता कई सवाल भी खडे करती है । यह पंिक्तयां मन को झकझोर देती हैं ।-
मेरे घर मे लगे
शहीद भगतसिंह,सुभाष चन्द्र बोस और शिवाजी के कलेण्डर
मेरे गाँव-घर का पता पूछ रहे हैं-
सोच नहीं पा रहा हूँ
मैं क्या बताऊँ ?
जो आज़ादी के वक़्त देश मिला था
उसे ढूँढ्कर कहाँ से लाऊँ?
हिमांशु जी को धन्यवाद इस अच्छी ओर सत्या के शव्दो से सजी कविता के लिये, ओर आप को भी धन्यवाद हम तक पहुचाने के लिये.
nice sir and very tru
sachai ko ujagar karti ye rachna kuch sochne par majbur karti ha ..aabhar...
very appropriate reaction of an alert citizen and sensitive poet in present scenario
अंधेरी गुफा की इस भटकन पर
रोशनी डालती एक सशक्त रचना.
हिमांशु जी को कवि रूप में पढ़ना
सच बहुत प्रियकर है ! आभार !!
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डॉ.चन्द्रकुमार जैन
बहुत बढिया कविता। बहुत दिन बाद अच्छी कविता पढने को िमली।
अशोक मधुप
बेहतरीन रचना
सुन्दर रचना
Achhi rachna hai
aap dono ko sadhuwaad
I feel very sad when saw this photo.
nitant satya!!
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